this is cool but i think in the future you should go for a more unoriginal concept if you want to win
this is cool but i think in the future you should go for a more unoriginal concept if you want to win
Yeah, just look at Topspin.
I really liked the style of visuals, however the humor and writing left a lot to be desired. I like the concept a lot but no jokes really landed for me...everything felt kind of predictable and I wouldn't really say I felt entertained at all. The concept has a lot of potential but I don't really feel like this warranted being made. That being said, love the attention to detail both in the art and backgrounds.
To each their own sir! Thanks for the kind words all the same!
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it's not bad. except for the music.... they keep playing low by flo rida.
I know you think I'm subhuman or whatever but that aside I think that you're a talented dude, and I'd love to see you do more original stuff like this in the future (and less gamegrumpspokemonsonicdeadbeatenhorses). The animation's really smooth and fluid, and the shading added a lot of depth-- it's really apparent that you put a lot of work into the visuals and I can appreciate that. However my issue with the content itself is that it felt kind of...empty? It was really nice visually, but it lacked any real substance to make it memorable beyond just a smooth fight scene. Like, it was nice to observe but I felt no investment in anything that was going on, and the endjoke itself didn't really feel like a good enough payoff to justify all the buildup. Unless this was strictly an animation showcase, in which case ya nailed it. This might be nitpicky as well but from a film perspective the shot of his eyes widening should've had him positioned on the left rather than the right-- the audience typically associates something moving left to right with progression/moving towards something, whereas when the character is framed on the right side moving towards the left we get the impression he's returning back to where he began. Again, maybe that's a bit nitpicky, but personally I found that shot kind of jarring because of the choice in screen direction. But yeah It's good to see you doing some original stuff and I look forward to seeing some more developed work from you in the future!
I wouldn't say it was strictly an animation showcase but it was definitely experimental, to see how much I could do and convey with minimal sound and zero dialogue.
As for the change in perspective when he first spots the chest, you're absolutely right. I'm not sure what made me do that shot in that way but it definitely threw stuff off.
Thanks for the critique, though!
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your gonna get your ass kicked flikkernicht
FUCK YOU ROBOT JONES YOU RUINED MY BIRTHDAY
you know what flikkernicht, i have had it up to her with you. stop bully me and i will let you free
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